Improv Comics ~Blue-Senoire~


August 14th, 2010, 9:19 pm



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The letter that says 'I hate your stinking guts, et al.' is a quote from the Little Rascals movie from 1994. I knew I knew it from somewheres. I had google find out for me though! It's a pretty good movie. This of course does not excuse or explain the TMI factor of this comic.

Perhaps, to quote Full Metal Jacket, it's,' so ugly it could be a modern art masterpiece!'?

posted by mandu on August 15th, 2010, 1:08 pm



 

Very nice review, Blue! You put the words right in my mouth. ^.^

posted by Zanoh on August 16th, 2010, 2:37 am



  @Zash

You need 10 comics, and from where I am standing, your comic does not look promising.

posted by Zanoh on August 17th, 2010, 10:41 pm



  @Oman96

Added your comic to the list.

posted by Zanoh on August 18th, 2010, 4:21 am



  @Zash

Alright mate. Since you are just starting (Though I doubt it by the number of comics in your belt is staggering), I will be a bit lenient, but I am not pulling my punches.

Your story does NOT make sense. It looks like it can't stay consistent. From what I gathered from those four comics is that the world is in peril and it is up to the hedgehogs to save it. This has been done to death and therefore is not original let alone interesting.

And if the plot wasn't great, your presentation of said story is also poor. I can barely read any of the text due to the fact it clashes with the backgrounds you use. It is very unorganized, AND I caught moderate capitalization and grammatical errors.

Characters - Aside from the main cast, you are using recolors. EVERY. SONIC. AUTHOR. I. HAVE. MET. USES. THIS. It is unoriginal and an eyesore to ones eyes compared to the shaded textures of the actual characters. You also do what every newcomer or sprite author does in sonic comics, your recolor is pals with the main cast in some form or shape and this too is unoriginal. And, above all, why is SANTA of all people in this comic? It makes no sense

Originality - None. It's as I said. You used recolors, you made just another sonic comic, AND you presented your comic poorly.

Now do you see what I mean by it not looking promising?

posted by Zanoh on August 18th, 2010, 3:33 pm



  @Zash

If you are the ONLY one thinking that, then sadly mate, that's just your ego talking. Your REAL plot is as light and ice thin as every "just another comic tying into the Sonic Universe" is, and you haven't changed nor disproven it. Your attitude isn't even making your situation better. If you can't reach out to the general audience and are just giving me excuses, you aren't making yourself a better author. You are just being cock handed like the rest of every newcomer I come across.

I will say again, improve and make yourself better, because if this is your best, then you will burn and fall hard.

posted by Zanoh on August 19th, 2010, 1:24 am



 

Could someone please review my comic, Club Love?
http://clublove.smackjeeves.com/

posted by Rosie11 on August 24th, 2010, 10:23 pm



  @Rosie11

Added. ^.^

posted by Zanoh on August 24th, 2010, 10:27 pm



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