User's Comments:

Cresent Night, 15 Aug 2009 05:39 pm

Here's the comic if anyone's interested in it:
http://questforthechaosemeralds.smackjeeves.com/
Issues that did bother me in the comic were more out of the official characters themselves and have nothing to do with Slimey's comic. Such as if the Echidna tribe were intelligent enough to help create the Gizoid, why do they all still carry spears and live in huts (I assume it to be huts since I found no buildings in any of the comics and shows) with clothes that's more of a tribal feel? They built a robot that could survive for over four thousand years and still function perfectly as if only a few days have passed.....

Well, as they say "It's so easy a Caveman can do it."

This two page comic I made sadly feels badly done in presentation, but ever since Photoshop disappeared from this comp, I've been using paint to get by. Copying and pasting bit by bit, specific number of sentences by specific number of sentences, while my impatience slowly came way to insanity..... I have no idea if I'm doing this the hard way. If anyone would know how I could do this a bit quicker, I'd love to hear it. If there's no other way until I get Photoshop again, then I'll swallow my impatience and continue to do it this way but much more... care.... if I can manage....

Also, I added my own comic to the list, Ultimo Tourn's, if anyone's up for grabs with it.
@All authors: If there is a comic you are currently about to review or currently reviewing, let me know and I'll place your name next to the comic in the list.
@everyone: If there's anything that may look wrong with this review, I'd gladly accept the criticizm. For my own personal review, I placed too much text here and repeated a few issues a couple of times here....



BaWaSoG:
http://bawasog.thewebcomic.com

Kemono Densetsu
http://kemonodensetsu.smackjeeves.com/

LOL Waffles (re-review by Ultimate Ridley)
http://lolwaffles.smackjeeves.com

Tales of the Nihilist (Re-review)
http://ton.smackjeeves.com

The After Subtract (Re-review)
http://tas.smackjeeves.com/

Variable Hunters:
http://variablehunter.smackjeeves.com/

1000:
http://1000.smackjeeves.com

Planet B:
http://planetb.smackjeeves.com

ARK: The Adventures of Ridley and Kraid:
http://arkthecomic.smackjeeves.com

Miraj:
http://miraj.smackjeeves.com/

Saturday Night Mudkipz:
http://saturdaynightmudkipz.smackjeeves.com/

TLS (Chapter 6 onwards):
http://www.theloneswordsman.smackjeeves.com/

Madness Manga:
http://madnessmanga.smackjeeves.com

Nio Transient Pulse:
http://nio.smackjeeves.com/comics/

Nokomi's Vengeance:
http://nokomis.smackjeeves.com/

Mosaic Overdose
http://jinxthemagicalnut.smackjeeves.com

True Sigma:
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=54408

Afrohawkman, 15 Aug 2009 06:02 pm

Vector was cool He transitioned well.

Anyway, there WAS one thing that threw me off when I was about to review this. I was wondering, if Vanilla let them go to the mall for the chao, what was she doing out of the house? She made like no indication that she was going outside as well. That just threw me off.

Other than that, the only thing I disagree with the review with is the overall score of the plot because it kept my interest a bit more than the credit it was given. That's just imo though.

Cresent Night, 15 Aug 2009 06:23 pm

@Afro: You are correct there. But like I said (some time ago but I can't remember what) every author's review is mostly based on opinion of a comic. I could enjoy broccoli sandwitches (never tried it before, but it's interesting to think of...) and give the score a 10 while you would give it a 5. Doesn't mean your wrong, it's what you think. Well, thanks for your opinion on this review.

And I never thought about Vanilla going outside.... I assumed she wanted to go see Sonic and Sally about something she found out about the Chaos emeralds, and the robots got to her first before she could tell the others ^^

That reminds me, I never placed it on my review, but I wondered why did it take 8 whole years for Vanilla to tell Sonic and Sally about the Chaos emeralds! It said 8 years passed when Tails and Cream were older and Vanilla gave Sonic and Sally info on it....

I can't wrap my head around that for how it could take that long.

Malakite, 15 Aug 2009 06:32 pm

@Cresent
I don't mean to nitpick but the Malakite in me read your description of originality, based on how you wrote and described it, it didn't fit a 7/10, it sounded like the mark was more along 3-4 out of 10. Not that I'm disagree with your review Its just what I sorta felt as I was reading your description.

Afrohawkman, 15 Aug 2009 07:33 pm

@Cresent: For that matter, how do Tails and Cream like so different 8 years later, but Sonic and Sal look exactly the same? That 8 years seemed more like it was just a period for Tails and Cream to grow than it was an actual time passing.

Chabo, 15 Aug 2009 07:57 pm

Just curious... I have had my comic reviewed here before.

Though I wish to have it reviewed by a certain critic. Is that reasonable or possible?

*COUGH*Malakite*COUGH*

Malakite, 15 Aug 2009 07:59 pm

Haahaha private messages only. Problem is I'm already reviewing a comic and after that i'll be on vacation for 3 weeks. If you can wait till mid september when I come back i'll review it, if not, there are plenty of reviewers here. I thank you for choosing me, i feel flattered XD

Theonewhoisodd, 15 Aug 2009 08:33 pm

I think quite a few people want Malakite to review their comics. I know I do, but I have no doubt that the others are just as able.

Malakite, 15 Aug 2009 08:39 pm

@Everyone
Alright, after a bit of deciding, anyone who wants me to review their comic, send a private message to me and i'll put you on a list, i'll do a couple of reviews while i'm on vacation. Since i'll be in a more peaceful environment I can probably come up with some better content. So yea, Pm's and i'll tell you the order of the review your on and then yea, i work on it. If you don't want to wait, there are other capable people here to review, I appreciate that i've attracted many people's attention here but I don't want to take over the damn site XD

Afrohawkman, 15 Aug 2009 08:43 pm

Oh no you don't! You're going to be going on vacation, let us handle it. Go enjoy yourself, Mr. Star Reviewer.

Malakite, 15 Aug 2009 08:46 pm

@Afrohawkman
Well excuuuuuuse me princess.... be my guest.

Cresent Night, 15 Aug 2009 08:52 pm

@Mal: When the comic reached a point where Sonic and Sally battled Robotnik alone and the whole act EXACTLY like their media counter-parts, you would've seen a 3-4 there. But the author added a bit of spice here and there in the comic. The quest for the chaos emeralds are the same, but the actions involved and plot twists are far different.... yeah, I probably could've made it a bit more noticable on my review....

Afrohawkman, 15 Aug 2009 09:51 pm

@Mal: Haha, princess.

But really dude, you're going on vacation to get a vacation. You're supposed to be relaxing and chillin', not being 'on the job'. If that relaxes you, go on ahead and review. Otherwise, just relax and leave it to us. The comic won't go crashing on you while you have some fun. :)

Kayorei, 16 Aug 2009 02:43 am

Feels awkward asking, but is there an inactivity limit on comics that you guys review here? I ask because I'd like to have my comic "Everlasting Peace and All That..." reviewed, but it's been on something of an artist's block hiatus for going on five months now.

There's virtually no indication of any review submission guidelines anywhere around here. Just "post if you want your comic reviewed".

floob, 16 Aug 2009 01:07 pm

Can I have my comic reviewed? Here's the link. BTW I just started it.

http://epicmario.smackjeeves.com/

BaldDumboRat, 16 Aug 2009 01:14 pm

@ Kayorei- It's fine if you havn't been activlely updating the comic lately, as long as it has at least 10 pages we'll add it to the list for review

@ floob- ummm... I thought since you were kinda sorta a reviewer here you would have known by now that there's a 10 comic minimum before a review can be done? Just get at least 6 more pages up and ask again, then we'd be happy to *nod*

floob, 16 Aug 2009 01:42 pm

I'd never heard that before.

Afrohawkman, 16 Aug 2009 04:37 pm

...You're fired. Clean your desk out by Monday.

Badx, 16 Aug 2009 07:11 pm

Oh god, please say you're serious.

Kayorei, 16 Aug 2009 09:18 pm

BaldDumboRat - Ah, thanks for clearing that up. Guess I'll go ahead and make the review request official with a link, then, just in case.

http://epaat.smackjeeves.com/

Afrohawkman, 16 Aug 2009 10:03 pm

@Badx: Nah I'm not allowed to fire people.

Badx, 17 Aug 2009 09:13 pm

@Afrohawkman Aw...well, I can dream...


And as for Kayorei, I'll review the comic if you don't mind.

LaMoop, 18 Aug 2009 09:57 am

I think I've already requested this here before, however it's not on the list, so..

If anyone would review True Sigma, that'd be cool.
http://truesigma.smackjeeves.com

Yamataro, 19 Aug 2009 09:36 am

I thought someone review True Sigma already. :?
Anyway, I'm the only one that can fire peoples! -_-

Slimey Jacobstien, 19 Aug 2009 08:36 pm

Okay... I'm Finally back from the GC, so I can finally see this this review for more than five minutes (Hotel internet really doesn't come cheap)

Anyways, I would ultimately say something about how grammar/spelling is a bit overgraded, but instead I'll just poke at your questioning how primitives wielding spears could somehow build robots.

Well, it's a long debatable topic that always sprouted in various Final Fantasy discussions (For short, I'll just call it "The Airship Paradox").

It's when various technological objects/weapons seem to clash with the date in time where game it originated from takes place (most commonly from the original FF game, the airship) and it was almost always claimed that ancient civilizations or a very smart individual were the ones who created the said object/weapon and we're just supposed to accept it with no questions asked.

Granted this is not an intelligent thing to do most of the time, but also you should never question the author/storyteller/whatever, because more than likely they can't explain it either.

However, I will hopefully clear up my Airship Paradox during Knuckles story as soon as that gets told (hopefully before it matures into Donna Troy's disease)

LaMoop, 20 Aug 2009 01:26 am

@Yama No, nobody reviewed True Sigma. I originally posted it some time before CN's "The story of Capy" review, but I don't see a review for it listed in the jumpbox and I don't see the comic's name on the to-do list.

Yamataro, 20 Aug 2009 09:59 am

We will then add it to the list.

Cresent Night, 20 Aug 2009 11:31 am

@Slimey: I never questioned you about how the Echidna's built the Gizoid. This was a question made entirely outside of my review. No points docked from that.

@Lamoop: Your comic's added to the list.

Slimey Jacobstien, 20 Aug 2009 05:17 pm

@Cresent Night I know, I just thought that I may as well answer that.

Also, the review stated that Lara-Su was an edit. She's actually an official character, but she's only been in a few issues (Mainly an uncanon sub-story called M25YL). But not many people would know this unless they were a huge fan of the comics.

Cresent Night, 21 Aug 2009 12:03 am

Now that you mention it, the name does stir something in my head....

Either way it still looks like a male in your comic, but I'm not sure if that's how Lara-Su is supposed to look in the comic (Only read about her; don't know what she exactly looks like).

Or it could just be that I see her one way and other readers may see her another way. Like comparing a cucumber to a pickle.

Slimey Jacobstien, 21 Aug 2009 12:10 am

here's a recent pic of her:

http://media.comicvine.com/uploads/1/19859/831611-lara_su_picture_4_large.jpg

Cresent Night, 22 Aug 2009 06:53 am

*observes image*

So she's a Tomboy... well, that explains a lot ^^"

You could use a base that would make her look a bit taller if she's that tall in this pick. This image personifies her independence and the sprite you uses represents a timid version of her....

But it's your sprite ^^

Slimey Jacobstien, 22 Aug 2009 12:50 pm

@Cresent Night It was actually made by Deebs from a request.

She's actually the same size as the sonic characters when they were still young, the image just makes her look like she's taller.

Cresent Night, 22 Aug 2009 02:51 pm

I don't know what characters Deebs was using as a reference to create this character, all I know is that she looks like she's 12 and shorter in comparison to the other Sonic characters in your comic....

Tailsgod, 22 Aug 2009 04:44 pm

can I have AOT reviewed http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=54424

Afrohawkman, 23 Aug 2009 11:23 am

I'll review it Tailsgod.

Blue-Senoire, 25 Aug 2009 06:53 am

Review me if you dare. Here's one for you.
Senoire Delirium 2: Rivalry, written and drawn by me with some assistance.

It's a non-sprite full color adventure revolving around rivalry.

It can be found here.
http://senoiredelirium2rivalry.smackjeeves.com/comics/501196/cover/

Yamataro, 25 Aug 2009 08:44 am

Holy shi. 300 comics... wows. '-'

TicTacToeMan, 25 Aug 2009 08:51 pm

Edit: Actually, I'd prefer if you reviewed my other comic; http://sickofitall.smackjeeves.com/comics/683583/comic-1-author-houses/

Badx, 28 Aug 2009 09:09 pm

About two comics under the required amount, man.

Though this place has been kinda quiet, so by the time someone does pick it up you should have those last two in.

Tailsgod, 29 Aug 2009 09:05 pm

Thank you Afro

Chabo, 30 Aug 2009 01:36 pm

COMIC FINISHED! My comic--previously reviewed--is now finished!

I would like to request a re-review please. <3

WARNING FOR GORE/NUDITY/LANGUAGE.

http://pennhurst.smackjeeves.com

SexyBrianPuppet, 31 Aug 2009 07:52 pm

Some guy said I should request a review for my comic here. So can you review my comic "ANOTHER GOD DAMNED SONIC COMIC FUCK!"

http://agdscf.smackjeeves.com/

Malakite, 02 Sep 2009 02:48 am

*sighs* will one of you bastards post a review already!! I'm sitting here on my vacation seeing nothing but dead silence around here and its making me ancy!! SOMEONE DO SOEMTHING!!!
By the way, I'm enjoying my vacation very muchly.

mandu, 02 Sep 2009 03:35 am

Mandurian telegram: The silence might be attributed to school starting up for the younger people...Glad you're enjoying your va-ca!

Zanoh, 02 Sep 2009 05:57 am

@Mal Working my butt off, but expect two reviews from me when I am free.

Slimey Jacobstien, 06 Sep 2009 05:53 pm

@Any author who cares Would be fine for me to delete anyone's comment that says stuff like "Join please" or "Can I join?" or some shit like that?

Badx, 06 Sep 2009 08:01 pm

Delete away, captain.

Molly-sama, 07 Sep 2009 06:44 pm

URL change! Sorry, but you guys agreed to review my comic, Mosaic Overdose? I changed the url to http://mosaicoverdose.smackjeeves.com

Sorry for any confusion. ^^;;;

Slimey Jacobstien, 07 Sep 2009 09:22 pm

@Molly-sama could you swap the "a" and "i" around in the url?

Molly-sama, 07 Sep 2009 10:35 pm

gah! sorry! ><;;;;

fast typing. i fixed it. ^^;

Chabo, 08 Sep 2009 06:37 pm

I don't care if it's my comic or someone else's. SOMEONE post a review of SOMETHING!

I'll have to join and review myself, lol.

bloodrizer, 09 Sep 2009 01:50 pm

I would like to request a review, since my comic is not very popular )
http://animalwar.smackjeeves.com

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