Malakite's Colored Reviews - Proto-X-San


August 2nd, 2009, 9:00 am



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  Malakite, August 2nd, 2009, 4:48 am


Well it's review time, and this one is a bit of a doozie, enjoy!!

Proto-X-San:
http://protoxsan.smackjeeves.com/

*List*

BaWaSoG:
http://bawasog.thewebcomic.com

Kemono Densetsu
http://kemonodensetsu.smackjeeves.com/

LOL Waffles (re-review)
http://lolwaffles.smackjeeves.com

Tales of the Nihilist (Re-review)
http://ton.smackjeeves.com

The After Subtract (Re-review)
http://tas.smackjeeves.com/

Gladimus
http://gladimus.smackjeeves.com/

Variable Hunters:
http://variablehunter.smackjeeves.com/

Q4CE:
http://questforthechaosemeralds.smackjeeves.com/

1000:
http://1000.smackjeeves.com

Planet B:
http://planetb.smackjeeves.com

ARK: The Adventures of Ridley and Kraid:
http://arkthecomic.smackjeeves.com

Miraj:
http://miraj.smackjeeves.com/

Saturday Night Mudkipz:
http://saturdaynightmudkipz.smackjeeves.com/

TLS (Chapter 6 onwards):
http://www.theloneswordsman.smackjeeves.com/

Dark Amy:
http://darkamy.smackjeeves.com/

Chaos and Control:
http://chaoscontrol.smackjeeves.com/

Madness Manga:
http://madnessmanga.smackjeeves.com

Nio Transient Pulse:
http://nio.smackjeeves.com/comics/

Nokomi's Vengeance:
http://nokomis.smackjeeves.com/

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Reader Comments:

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Thanks Malakite, now I know every detail of what I need to improve on. :)
And, I realized that maybe I should of asked for a review AFTER I introduced those important points, which were supposed to come in the next few pages.
I think that remaking these first pages before I continue on with the story would be a good plan ^^;; as well as adding a new link for the author comic.
The first couple pages were actually a bit too big for the scanner (lol), but I think my new sketchbook should do the job for the new pages.
And going back to the "I should have waited to ask for a review", there's actually a lot more to Proto than "Typical Emo" lololol. It just hasn't been introduced yet. XD
So wow... thanks a lot for the insightful review Malakite. A harsh and to the point review is better than anything else I could have asked for in this case. :)

...At least I know my grammar and spelling are good. Lol.

posted by Demonstarr13 on August 2nd, 2009, 10:38 am



 

aw, Im glad demonstarr13 has taken it all in and wants to improve, now there's the sign of a good comnic artist in the making :)
haha your 'no one likes emo characters!' panel made me laugh out loud XD haha...tell that to me and my friends when we were 14 :P

posted by Theorah on August 3rd, 2009, 7:31 pm



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