Malakite's Colored Reviews - Proto-X-San

August 2nd, 2009, 9:00 am

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  Malakite, August 2nd, 2009, 4:48 am

Well it's review time, and this one is a bit of a doozie, enjoy!!




Kemono Densetsu

LOL Waffles (re-review)

Tales of the Nihilist (Re-review)

The After Subtract (Re-review)


Variable Hunters:



Planet B:

ARK: The Adventures of Ridley and Kraid:


Saturday Night Mudkipz:

TLS (Chapter 6 onwards):

Dark Amy:

Chaos and Control:

Madness Manga:

Nio Transient Pulse:

Nokomi's Vengeance:

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Reader Comments:


Thanks Malakite, now I know every detail of what I need to improve on. :)
And, I realized that maybe I should of asked for a review AFTER I introduced those important points, which were supposed to come in the next few pages.
I think that remaking these first pages before I continue on with the story would be a good plan ^^;; as well as adding a new link for the author comic.
The first couple pages were actually a bit too big for the scanner (lol), but I think my new sketchbook should do the job for the new pages.
And going back to the "I should have waited to ask for a review", there's actually a lot more to Proto than "Typical Emo" lololol. It just hasn't been introduced yet. XD
So wow... thanks a lot for the insightful review Malakite. A harsh and to the point review is better than anything else I could have asked for in this case. :)

...At least I know my grammar and spelling are good. Lol.

posted by Demonstarr13 on August 2nd, 2009, 10:38 am


aw, Im glad demonstarr13 has taken it all in and wants to improve, now there's the sign of a good comnic artist in the making :)
haha your 'no one likes emo characters!' panel made me laugh out loud XD haha...tell that to me and my friends when we were 14 :P

posted by Theorah on August 3rd, 2009, 7:31 pm

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