The Final Zone Review Page 03 (Saint Unborn)


May 15th, 2009, 3:15 pm



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I somehow expected this from you. But one thing about this review confuses me. The border comment. They ARE thick enough that you can tell where each panel is. The shadowing, ok maybe I can get rid of it. It's actually been getting annoying to me anyway. But explain the border issue again. I also like how nearly every weak point you hit occurred in the EARLIER issues, back when I was still relatively new to comic making.

posted by Majin Tobias on May 15th, 2009, 3:25 pm



 

The panel boarders. If you make them darker and thicker it gives the illusion that the panels pop out.

And the earlier ones...Well, I needed something to bounce off of...Not to mention I was doing homework while doing this so something had to give.

posted by Shadow The Unborn on May 15th, 2009, 3:42 pm



  You'd have to continue to update before that could happen, Blue Rose

Wow. Review. 3 pages. Definitely getting to the meat. Nice.

As for the comic itself, I was thinking about giving it a read to see if it were any good until you said it was 1100+ comics in. That'd just take forever.

posted by Afrohawkman on May 15th, 2009, 3:42 pm



 

I mean +100 pages...I must correct that...When I'm less tired...

posted by Shadow The Unborn on May 15th, 2009, 3:44 pm



 

Oh. Well then alright, I'll give it a read later. Well maybe. Right now I still have to review...well...you'll find out. I also have to update! First week in a while when I've been consistently updating! :D

Also, remove Kirby's Quest please. The author asked for a re-review, but I told him that it didn't really need one and he told me he just wanted my input so it doesn't need a re-review.

posted by Afrohawkman on May 15th, 2009, 3:45 pm



 

so you made a one-sided review showing the bad work. Well, that's a smart way to review. Show all the bad parts to it, some of which have been improved since it occurred.

posted by Majin Tobias on May 15th, 2009, 3:46 pm



  @ Majin

LOOK, I got A LOT on my plate now, sorry if it came off that way...I'll give it a more wide going over once the next chapter ends...

posted by Shadow The Unborn on May 15th, 2009, 3:52 pm



 

Nah, it just sounds like you chose the earlier pages just for the sake of doing the review. Just sounds a bit hypocritical to me, that's all.

posted by Majin Tobias on May 15th, 2009, 4:44 pm



 

Trust me...I was more merciful then I was intending to be...

posted by Shadow The Unborn on May 15th, 2009, 6:14 pm



 

Oh, and I'm reviewing Moubius Zone next...

posted by Shadow The Unborn on May 15th, 2009, 6:18 pm



 

...I need to get Pokemon: Project Soft Shell reviewed by you one I develop it more fully first. It's still in it's baby steps right now...

posted by D00D64 on May 15th, 2009, 8:06 pm



 

I would suggest more pages first, man...

posted by Shadow The Unborn on May 15th, 2009, 8:08 pm



 

Hurr hurr hurr...

posted by Ryderlol on May 15th, 2009, 10:32 pm



 

*belches loudly* 'scuse me.

posted by GabrielsThoughts on May 15th, 2009, 10:37 pm



 

Like I said, when I develop it more.

posted by D00D64 on May 15th, 2009, 11:21 pm



 

Judge for yourself...:
http://tfz.smackjeeves.com/comics/

posted by Shadow The Unborn on May 16th, 2009, 2:23 am



 

Can someone review my comic, E-s-c-a-p-e?

http://e-s-c-a-p-e.smackjeeves.com/comics/

posted by Mr. 'Chidna on May 16th, 2009, 5:42 am



 

woody: i cant remeber why i used to hate you

posted by true mercha on May 16th, 2009, 8:20 am



 

I didn't realize you only reviewed sprite comics, sorry.

posted by venion on May 16th, 2009, 9:22 am



  @Venion

No we review any kind of comic, we just usually get requests for Sprite Comics.

posted by Afrohawkman on May 16th, 2009, 9:53 am



 

So you could possibly review mine at some point?
I linked it like twice already on prevous pages, but - http://deathflavourcake.smackjeeves.com/

posted by venion on May 16th, 2009, 10:02 am



 

Sure, post a link to it.

posted by Afrohawkman on May 16th, 2009, 3:35 pm



  I thought this was a fair review.

Pretty good review to me.

posted by the being on May 16th, 2009, 10:03 pm



 

Why do people ask for reviews then complain when the review is bad? That always baffles me, I thought if you ask for a review it means you want to discover what faults your comic has, it's strong points and weak points so that you can better improve it... not bitch if the reviewer doesn't like it. Sheesh >>

posted by BaldDumboRat on May 17th, 2009, 8:01 am



 

Great review..It made me laugh a few times.

I'm gonna do a few more issues of "Metal Overlord" before i get mine review'd

posted by Brandutt on May 17th, 2009, 12:17 pm



 

@Bald: It's baffling. The human ego is a headache...

posted by Shadow The Unborn on May 17th, 2009, 12:34 pm



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