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Majin Tobias, 15 May 2009 03:25 pm

I somehow expected this from you. But one thing about this review confuses me. The border comment. They ARE thick enough that you can tell where each panel is. The shadowing, ok maybe I can get rid of it. It's actually been getting annoying to me anyway. But explain the border issue again. I also like how nearly every weak point you hit occurred in the EARLIER issues, back when I was still relatively new to comic making.

Shadow The Unborn, 15 May 2009 03:42 pm

The panel boarders. If you make them darker and thicker it gives the illusion that the panels pop out.

And the earlier ones...Well, I needed something to bounce off of...Not to mention I was doing homework while doing this so something had to give.

Afrohawkman, 15 May 2009 03:42 pm

You'd have to continue to update before that could happen, Blue Rose Wow. Review. 3 pages. Definitely getting to the meat. Nice.

As for the comic itself, I was thinking about giving it a read to see if it were any good until you said it was 1100+ comics in. That'd just take forever.

Shadow The Unborn, 15 May 2009 03:44 pm

I mean +100 pages...I must correct that...When I'm less tired...

Afrohawkman, 15 May 2009 03:45 pm

Oh. Well then alright, I'll give it a read later. Well maybe. Right now I still have to review...well...you'll find out. I also have to update! First week in a while when I've been consistently updating! :D

Also, remove Kirby's Quest please. The author asked for a re-review, but I told him that it didn't really need one and he told me he just wanted my input so it doesn't need a re-review.

Majin Tobias, 15 May 2009 03:46 pm

so you made a one-sided review showing the bad work. Well, that's a smart way to review. Show all the bad parts to it, some of which have been improved since it occurred.

Shadow The Unborn, 15 May 2009 03:52 pm

@ Majin LOOK, I got A LOT on my plate now, sorry if it came off that way...I'll give it a more wide going over once the next chapter ends...

Majin Tobias, 15 May 2009 04:44 pm

Nah, it just sounds like you chose the earlier pages just for the sake of doing the review. Just sounds a bit hypocritical to me, that's all.

Shadow The Unborn, 15 May 2009 06:14 pm

Trust me...I was more merciful then I was intending to be...

Shadow The Unborn, 15 May 2009 06:18 pm

Oh, and I'm reviewing Moubius Zone next...

D00D64, 15 May 2009 08:06 pm

...I need to get Pokemon: Project Soft Shell reviewed by you one I develop it more fully first. It's still in it's baby steps right now...

Shadow The Unborn, 15 May 2009 08:08 pm

I would suggest more pages first, man...

Ryderlol, 15 May 2009 10:32 pm

Hurr hurr hurr...

GabrielsThoughts, 15 May 2009 10:37 pm

*belches loudly* 'scuse me.

D00D64, 15 May 2009 11:21 pm

Like I said, when I develop it more.

Shadow The Unborn, 16 May 2009 02:23 am

Judge for yourself...:
http://tfz.smackjeeves.com/comics/

Mr. 'Chidna, 16 May 2009 05:42 am

Can someone review my comic, E-s-c-a-p-e?

http://e-s-c-a-p-e.smackjeeves.com/comics/

true mercha, 16 May 2009 08:20 am

woody: i cant remeber why i used to hate you

venion, 16 May 2009 09:22 am

I didn't realize you only reviewed sprite comics, sorry.

Afrohawkman, 16 May 2009 09:53 am

@Venion No we review any kind of comic, we just usually get requests for Sprite Comics.

venion, 16 May 2009 10:02 am

So you could possibly review mine at some point?
I linked it like twice already on prevous pages, but - http://deathflavourcake.smackjeeves.com/

Afrohawkman, 16 May 2009 03:35 pm

Sure, post a link to it.

the being, 16 May 2009 10:03 pm

I thought this was a fair review. Pretty good review to me.

BaldDumboRat, 17 May 2009 08:01 am

Why do people ask for reviews then complain when the review is bad? That always baffles me, I thought if you ask for a review it means you want to discover what faults your comic has, it's strong points and weak points so that you can better improve it... not bitch if the reviewer doesn't like it. Sheesh >>

Brandutt, 17 May 2009 12:17 pm

Great review..It made me laugh a few times.

I'm gonna do a few more issues of "Metal Overlord" before i get mine review'd

Shadow The Unborn, 17 May 2009 12:34 pm

@Bald: It's baffling. The human ego is a headache...

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