Bar'd - pooppoop


May 1st, 2009, 9:40 pm



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Plot 0/10? There IS a plot. I'd give at least a 7/10, but 0/10 IMO is harsh.

posted by G.I.U.L.I.O. on May 2nd, 2009, 12:06 am



 

...There were inside jokes and ones which didn't make sense...? Um, can you provide some examples? 'Cause I've only really been questioned on one joke, everyone seems to've been able to understand the others, and that joke only seemed to be because I presented it shoddily... so yeah, um, any examples...?

posted by Dregan on May 2nd, 2009, 5:49 am



 

the plot was that they are at a bar... i didnt see anything else besides that he was looking for his brother, but no one was doing anything to drive that plot forward... besides, if i gave it a 7, the overall score would remain.

examples of jokes i did not understand at all are the ones about the dream, the one about him having a big brother (was that supposed to be his big brother in the bottom left?), the joke about elo's rant, there was no back story to provide info about whether or not it was true (the only part i liked about it was elo's smile at the end), and lastly... when the drunk does... something to either vas or shiela, you cant tell what it was, thus it made no sense... something just... kinda happens

thats what i thought anyway... if you want, u can get someone to rereview it *shrugs* i still gave it a 7/10 which i think is good anyway

posted by pooppoop on May 2nd, 2009, 7:24 am



  sonic overload

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posted by overdrive on May 2nd, 2009, 10:33 am



 

Don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining about the rating, I was merely confused as to which jokes you were referring to, as I hadn't really had much trouble with them from anyone else...

The dream... I'm not quite sure what's not to get, it's just the idea that this 'nightmare scene' was just too ridiculous to be taken as serious.
The big brother (which is the one I had trouble with due to not quite getting it across right) the idea is that Vas is supposed to be this huge muscly freak, and thus when Vas states it as his 'big' brother, Shelia gets this image of this huge, steroid'd Vas into her head.
Elo's rant it's supposed to be assumed to be true by Vas' reaction to it. It was basically a way of revealing the backstory to the audience in a way which also fleshed out a key part of Elo's personality.
And... when the drunk does something to Vas or Shelia? Um... what comic are you even referring to there?

But yeah, hope that cleared some of those up... and I guess I should probably also include the 'thanks for the review' which I kind of forgot in the last comment, probably being what kind of left you to think I was unhappy with it...

posted by Dregan on May 2nd, 2009, 3:39 pm



 

meh, it got better than the review someone did of my comic, it doesnt bother me... i just gave it what i thought it deserved *shrugs*

posted by pooppoop on May 2nd, 2009, 11:24 pm



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