Kirby's Quest Review - pooppoop


April 23rd, 2009, 6:40 pm



Average Rating: None

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  Good Call, Dood64

This is pretty much a text review as an image. No offense or anything, but it doesn't show off the comic or anything. Maybe add images next time?

Also, this review seems...off. Like the description doesn't match your actual rating. For example, the originality: I know for a fact he pretty much uses recolors, so an 8 for originality is pretty high. I could see if you talked about the originality of the story, which is okay as a premise, but you didn't grade it off of that. So it struck me as weird.

In addition...I'd say there's some slight bias in what you're saying. Like I can tell you're speaking from a video gamer's perspective just from comments like "it's hard to believe this story isn't in an official game" and "I wish the creator would make used of Kirby's natural talent of power stealing XP". It's just too much personal opinion here. No offense or anything, but you gotta get rid of THAT kind of personal opinion, it's too biased for a reviewer.

Also, there are a few spelling and grammar errors. Maybe look over it next time to catch those.

posted by Afrohawkman on April 23rd, 2009, 8:32 pm



 

ok, i will try harder next time ^.^ thanks for the advice

posted by pooppoop on April 23rd, 2009, 8:34 pm



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