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April 19th, 2009, 3:39 pm

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AWESOME! I am very happy with this review! =D

How could I improve neatness is something I would like to know, though... <.<

posted by degreenfreak on April 19th, 2009, 5:48 pm

  Yo, Degreenfreak

I'd recommend changing your first's demanding people to join a forum. That's not attracting people. Also...the first couple comics are just text. That's a bit boring, and it doesn't really give the reader an idea of what the comic's about unless they feel like reading.

As for your neatness, I'd say you waste a good amount of space. Like, there's just blank space out of random. Considering the rest of the presentation I suppose it's okay, but it doesn't look very professional. Then again, it is a unique style, so I can't think of a way to change it atm. I'll let you know if I think of something.

Still, kickass comic. :)

posted by Afrohawkman on April 19th, 2009, 6:45 pm


@Afrohawkman: I agree with your first paragraph. maybe I'll remake the first few to make it look more interesting.

However with the blank space, that's because I don't like things cluttered up, so there's space to easily tell which panel is which, and I have room for text bubbles.

@FlyingMonkey: I would like to ask which comic you had trouble reading the most, so I can see your point

And as for the professional stuff, I accidentally uploaded the old version of this comic (this is the better version):

I don't know if it'll change your mind much, but I fixed the last panel by ALOT. >.>

Edit: thanks both you, which I forgot to say :p

posted by degreenfreak on April 20th, 2009, 1:40 am


Fm add this to the list.

posted by Yamataro on April 20th, 2009, 8:02 am


It's not any strip in particular. I just found that the format of the comic made it hard to follow the order of events.

posted by FlyingMonkey on April 20th, 2009, 11:19 am


HEY GUYS, I'm now an author here!
I call Peanut Butter Pancakes.

posted by Pinesal on April 20th, 2009, 5:32 pm


Could I get another review for CBCL? I think I've made drastic improvement from the last time. (

posted by CursedBluto on April 20th, 2009, 9:18 pm




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