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July 11th, 2011, 3:28 am



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Hey, before I say anything else, I'd like to note that this is a good review, with plenty of thought and reasoning behind it. But I have to say, at the end of your author comment, using YOURSELF as the counter-example sort of... doesn't work. Of course you think the way you've written is the right way, you're biased towards that point- but because you're talking about YOUR writing, you sort of nulify your own point. Standing up and going 'look at what I did better than you' isn't exactly critical analysis... if you want to use an example, try using a seperate comic that you think is a good example, not your own. When you make the matter about you it makes your point less meaningful as a piece of critical writing, and more a way of one-upping someone else...
Anyway, don't want to leave it on that note, as I say, this was still a good review with some good points and comments on the comic. Just try not to do the 'myself as an example' in future...

posted by Dregan on July 11th, 2011, 5:48 am



 

Wasn't trying to be egotistical, I just havn't been able to find any other examples that don't use those cliches. I'll re-word it, then.

posted by BaldDumboRat on July 11th, 2011, 6:56 am



 

I am Requesting a Review of "ComplicatedNess" Please and Thank you!

posted by Chowder12 on July 11th, 2011, 2:30 pm



 

Thank you for your review, and I'll definitely get to work on some of the things that you mentioned. I appreciate it.

posted by HeartfeltSins on July 11th, 2011, 11:05 pm



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